Excerpt from S.J. Carson's Debut Novel, Aveline

Chapter 1

She heard them before she saw them.

“Hey, Fatsoline!”

Aveline froze. It was Quintana, and close behind, her lieutenant Cynthia. She knew that if she turned she was giving them the power to call her that awful nickname, yet she feared the consequences if she didn’t.

As she turned, Quintana gave her a shove from behind and she fell onto her knees with a thud, all her books flying from her arms. The two girls surrounded her.

“I hear you were swilling the garbage pail again,” said Quintana. “What’d you think you’d find in there? Leftover meatloaf?”

Cynthia snorted. Aveline averted her eyes.

“I-I don’t eat from the garbage pail.” Aveline bit her lower lip to prevent herself from crying.

Just then, she heard the sound of heels clacking on the marble floor. The three girls stood immediately to face Sister Harriet, their Language Arts teacher. A member of the Sacred Order of the Monnag, Sister Harriet was dressed in a black habit, with prayer beads around her waist. At the end of the prayer beads was the charm of Monnag, a fleur-de-lis with the head of a dragon turned to the left. Sister Harriet was young and the girls were not afraid of her, but they stopped teasing Aveline when she walked over to them.







Third Moon by SJ Carson

Excerpt from S.J. Carson's Second Novel, Third Moon

Chapter 1

Kateri James hated the way she looked. She had a round, childlike face with big brown eyes and full lips; unruly mousy-brown hair; and a short, pudgy figure. Her back was riddled with scars from the beatings she’d taken over the years from sadistic teachers and bosses.

At almost eighteen years old, she should have been at university. She was certainly bright enough, and a voracious reader. But, because of her lowly Genetic Fitness Score, she was not allowed to attend.

On the planet Ceres X—so called because it was tenth from the sun—each person was assigned a Genetic Fitness Score at birth. Determined by an analysis of the child’s DNA, the GFS was based on factors like prospective intelligence, facial symmetry, height, weight, metabolism, robustness of the organs, and likelihood of heritable diseases. Scores ranged from 1 to 5.

One’s score determined everything in their life—where they could live, what educational level they were allowed to attain, what jobs they could have, whom they could marry, and even where they could shop and eat and socialize. Those who scored below a 2 were called the Ungrul—the untouchables. The Twos and Threes were middle-class. And those who scored a 4 or above were known as the Ta’laan—the upper class, addressed by the titles of “Lord” and “Lady.”

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