Excerpt from S.J. Carson's Debut Novel, Aveline
Chapter 1
She heard them before she saw them.
“Hey, Fatsoline!”
Aveline froze. It was Quintana, and close behind, her lieutenant Cynthia. She knew that if she turned she was giving them the power to call her that awful nickname, yet she feared the consequences if she didn’t.
As she turned, Quintana gave her a shove from behind and she fell onto her knees with a thud, all her books flying from her arms. The two girls surrounded her.
“I hear you were swilling the garbage pail again,” said Quintana. “What’d you think you’d find in there? Leftover meatloaf?”
Cynthia snorted. Aveline averted her eyes.
“I-I don’t eat from the garbage pail.” Aveline bit her lower lip to prevent herself from crying.
Just then, she heard the sound of heels clacking on the marble floor. The three girls stood immediately to face Sister Harriet, their Language Arts teacher. A member of the Sacred Order of the Monnag, Sister Harriet was dressed in a black habit, with prayer beads around her waist. At the end of the prayer beads was the charm of Monnag, a fleur-de-lis with the head of a dragon turned to the left. Sister Harriet was young and the girls were not afraid of her, but they stopped teasing Aveline when she walked over to them.
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But as soon as the Sister passed, they began their cruel game again.
“Hey, stop!”
Aveline looked up and saw her best friend, Bruno Page. Like Aveline, he was thirteen years old. He had sandy brown hair that fell into his eyes and a round, freckled face.
The bullies turned.
“Oh, it’s only Doggo,” said Cynthia.
“My name is Bruno.” He gritted his teeth.
“Well, Bruno’s a dog’s name,” said Cynthia.
“You’d better leave her alone—”
“Or what?” said Quintana, hands on her hips. “Gonna tell your daddy on us? He’s just a commoner, not even a member of the Party.” This was a sore spot for Bruno, and Quintana knew it. Only the wealthy and well-connected could join the National Democratic Party of their own volition; the poor needed Sponsors to vouch for their integrity. Bruno hated to be reminded that he was from a lower-class background, that the only way he could attend a private school like Belfort Academy was on scholarship. He lifted his fist as if to strike her, and she laughed.
“You wouldn’t hit a girl.”
“You bet I would.”
Quintana waggled her fingers in his face. “I’m so scared, I’m shaking.”
Cynthia gave Aveline’s books a kick, sending them flying. “We’ll be back, so don’t get too comfortable.”
With that, the two girls sauntered down the hall, their heels clicking on the floor. Aveline trembled, her face red. Bruno gave her a hand and helped her to her feet.
“Thanks,” she said sheepishly. This wasn’t the first time he’d had to rescue her from the bullies.
He shrugged. “No need to thank me.”
Bruno picked up Aveline’s books and carried them for her. They exited the school building and went into the courtyard, a large square of grass surrounded by big shade trees at whose center was a tall marble statue of the Leader—Aveline’s grandfather, Alfred Fleur.
Fifty years ago, Alfred had founded the National Democratic Party and led a coup to overthrow King Reuel IV and take control of the country’s government, installing himself as its Supreme Leader and establishing the various ministries: the Ministry of Law and Peace, the Ministry of Civic Enlightenment, and the Ministry of Health among them. He had also established the state religion, the Sacred Order of the Monnag, named after the sigil of the Fleur family.
“I don’t understand why you don’t just use your grandfather—or your mother or even your uncle—to get Cynthia and Quintana off your back,” said Bruno.
Aveline’s mother was Allyn Monnag Fleur, Minister of Civic Enlightenment, or Lightminister for short. Her uncle Simon, Allyn’s younger brother, was Minister of Law and Peace, also known as the Lawminister. It was true that Aveline could have mentioned one of her relatives to the bullies because it was high treason to speak ill of a public figure, but there was no law against making fun of one of their descendants. Besides, the bullies knew exactly who Aveline was. They bullied her precisely because she did not look like a Fleur. She was tall and big-boned, with frizzy blonde hair and freckled skin and an upturned nose wide at the bridge. The rest of the Fleurs were small and dark-haired, with sharp features and paper-pale skin.
In response to his question, she shrugged. “It wouldn’t do any good.”
“If my grandfather were Leader, I would be shouting his name from the rooftops and nobody would ever mess with me.”
They both looked up at the statue. Alfred had been a strapping man in his youth, with a barrel chest and a mustache and a look of absolute determination in his eyes, which the sculptor had captured perfectly. Posed in the Salute of Loyalty, his right hand over his heart, he gave the salute back to the country he had saved from a tyrannical monarchy. Aveline and Bruno both saluted the Leader, lest any of the Sisters come out and find them staring idly at the statue without paying proper respect.
The two friends sat on a bench together, sharing the chocolate muffins they’d taken from the cafeteria at lunchtime. The Ministry of Education ensured that every school was well-stocked with food for its students. Even though Aveline’s mother had her on a strict diet at home, she could eat whatever she wanted at school, and thus never lost any weight—much to Allyn’s chagrin.
Aveline often wished she had been born into Bruno’s family instead of the Fleurs. How wonderful it would have been not to be scrutinized and judged at every moment! How wonderful not to be compared to the other members of her family and to her forebears! But she also knew that Bruno would have given his right arm to have been in her position as the so-called luckiest girl in the entire country.
“Want to play a game of cricket?” asked Bruno.
Aveline sighed. “I’m afraid I’ve got riding lessons today.”
At three thirty, a car came to pick her up and take her from school in the City Center back to the Fleur Estate. The driver, Elton, smiled at her in the rearview mirror. Aveline smiled back, though she’d never been entirely comfortable with being driven around in one of the black Party cars like a celebrity while Bruno and the lower-class kids from school took the bus or walked.
The driver caught her eye in the rearview mirror. “How’re things, Miss Aveline?”
Elton was a burly man in his early fifties with a heavy mustache and kind eyes. He’d been driving her and her family around for as long as she could remember.
“Not so bad, Elton. And yourself?”
“Can’t complain. It’s a beautiful day. I’ve got air in my lungs and my favorite gal in the back.” He winked at her. “But I can tell something’s on your mind. What’s eatin’ at you, Miss Aveline? It’s not those bullies again, is it?”
She sighed. “You guessed it.”
When he stopped at a traffic light, he caught her eye again and smacked his right fist into his left hand. “Boy, I’d just like to—”
“It’s okay, Elton. Bruno and I will figure out a way to handle them. I appreciate it, though.”
The car stopped at the top of a wide brick drive, each stone of which had been hand-laid, with the largest stone nearest the Great House bearing the Fleurs’ dragon sigil. Aveline exited the car and walked up the elegant marble stairs leading to the House where she lived with her family. Four stories tall, with nearly two hundred rooms, the House sat upon a hill and was the most opulent structure in the entire country of Alterra. Behind the House, as far as the eye could see, sprawled the emerald grounds of the Estate, with lawns and meadows and forest and ponds and a creek and a hamlet built especially for Aveline’s late grandmother Marie, and rolling hills all along the perimeter. A tall iron fence followed the curves of the hills, sealing off the Estate from the rest of Calador, the capital city.
Aveline followed a dirt path a quarter of a mile down behind the House to the large stone stables situated by a pond patched with water lilies. After quickly changing into her riding clothes in the carriage house, she proceeded to the stable.
Her horse was a brown shiny Dutch Warmblood called Paintbrush, for the dusting of white across his snout. In the stall beside Paintbrush was a black Oldenburg called Pacer, her mother’s horse. A champion dressage rider in her youth, Allyn had since given up the sport to work in the Alterran government.
Paintbrush’s reins in her hand, she stopped to watch Jem lead a new horse in a circle around the corral and hold his hand above its head and command it to lie down, docile as a puppy.
Jeremiah “Jem” Caslon was twenty-eight years old and had started his job only recently. From the Province of Lystra in the southern part of the country, Jem had never been to Calador before, much less to the Fleur Estate. He was tall and well-built, handsome and soft-spoken, a true horse whisperer. He had olive skin that tanned easily, the sun bringing out the gold beneath it. The sun also streaked his dark brown hair gold, and he wore it long, so that it moved gently when he turned his head and he tucked it behind his ears when working with the horses.
“Hi, Jem!” said Aveline brightly, waving.
“Well, hello, Miss Aveline,” he said, giving a nonverbal command to the horse to make it rise.
Aveline mounted her own horse. As Jem guided her through a series of exercises, she couldn’t help but feel a bit sorry for the young man who had left everything, his family and friends and hometown. She also knew that he desperately wanted to be a member of the Party but could not find a Sponsor. He wore a crimson ribbon on his lapel to signify that he was an Aspirant.
“Since my mother is Lightminister,” said Aveline, “perhaps she can be your Sponsor.”
He shook his head, laughing softly. “You have no idea, Miss Aveline, how badly I wish she could.”
“I could just ask her.”
“Oh, no, please don’t trouble her on my account.”
After her lessons, Aveline returned to the House and ran upstairs to her room. She saw that Jossie, her lady’s maid, had left out a black dress for her. She changed quickly and dashed downstairs and into the dining room, taking a quick sniff under her arms and hoping she didn’t stink of body odor.
Just as she was conducting her sniff test, her grandfather Alfred marched into the room. He never walked anywhere; he always marched, a vestigial motion of his soldier days. He was only about five-foot-five and had lost weight and musculature as he’d aged, but he retained the same powerful, dignified air of his youth, and looked much taller than he was. Now, instead of a mustache, he wore a salt-and-pepper beard, and still had a full head of white hair. With his sharp nose and thin lips, he didn’t even have to open his mouth to seem intimidating. Aveline immediately straightened up when she saw him.
“Good evening, Grandfather,” she said, just as the old Monnag clock chimed six, echoing throughout the dining room.
“Good evening, Aveline,” he said in the upper-crust accent of Calador, which Aveline had never truly mastered. “No time to bathe?”
“My apologies, Grandfather.” She looked down at her feet.
He lifted her chin with his forefinger. “Always look at me when I’m speaking to you. And thank you for your honesty. But please do be sure to bathe after your riding lessons. We don’t want our home smelling like a stable now, do we?”
Aveline, trembling inside, shook her head no, trying not to break away from his gaze. But he was no longer paying attention to her; his focus had shifted to his daughter, Allyn Monnag Fleur.
“Ah, Madam Lightminister,” he said.
“My Leader.”
They liked to play this game, calling one another by their public titles in private. Alfred also liked to address Allyn as “Monnag,” to emphasize that he had given her the family sigil name, as opposed to her younger brother Simon.
Aveline studied Allyn as she walked in. She was thirty-five years old and stood five-foot-two. Slender to the point of being almost emaciated, she existed on little besides coffee and pills. Her thinness was more a political statement than a lifestyle choice—as if to demonstrate that, living in a land of plenty, she would not indulge.
Allyn was beautiful in the way of the Fleurs, with a straight nose, high cheekbones, and large gray eyes that seemed never to blink. Dressed in a skirt suit and stilettos, she wore the Monnag sigil pin—a gold dragon’s head with the fleur-de-lis—on her left lapel, signifying that she was a member of the Party. At the end of her long chestnut braid she wore the crimson loyalty ribbon. Despite seeing her mother every day, Aveline never failed to be struck by her beauty.
Allyn leaned down and gave her daughter a kiss on either cheek. “How was school today, darling?” she asked in the same clipped accent as Alfred.
“Wonderful,” lied Aveline. She made it a point never to trouble her mother with her problems.
Just then, her uncle Simon and his wife Lilia entered the dining room, smartly dressed. Simon, aged thirty-three, was short and dark-haired and slightly plump. Lilia was strawberry blonde and pretty in a bunny-rabbit sort of way. Their children, six-year-old Lilia (called Lily) and four-year-old Simon Junior (“S.J.” for short), followed close behind. Aveline found it funny that her aunt and uncle had duplicated themselves. And they doted on their miniature selves, making sure they had the best of everything, and turning them into entitled little brats. Aveline was sometimes forced to babysit her little cousins, who treated her like the bullies at school.
The family members were seated in their usual spots, Alfred at the head of the table, Allyn to his right, and Aveline to her right. To his left sat Simon and his family.
Aveline felt her mother’s hand on her back, reminding her to sit up straight in the presence of her grandfather.
The footmen began serving supper, beginning with pea soup. Aveline, who was hungry after her riding lessons, wolfed hers down. Under the table, Allyn nudged her foot, reminding her to eat more slowly and gracefully.
Allyn herself simply stirred her soup with her delicate spoon, lifting it to her lips to blow on it but never actually taking a bite. This was the way she always behaved at meals, so the undiscerning would think she was eating although no food actually passed her lips.
The second footman swept away their soup bowls, and another footman came in with the salad course and then the main course. Because Allyn had instructed the kitchen staff that Aveline was to be on a strict diet, the footman brought her a special plate, with wild rice, a thin chicken breast, and steamed broccoli, while the rest of the family enjoyed red meat and mashed potatoes.
To Aveline’s left, Allyn scarcely touched her meal, taking a single bite of steak and washing it down with red wine. The first footman appeared to refill her glass. Aveline knew her mother’s routine: she drank coffee throughout the day to stay awake, pills in the afternoon when her energy began to flag, and alcohol at night to wind down. Sometimes, if she had to give a speech in the evening, she would skip the alcohol and continue drinking coffee or taking pills.
“Monnag.” Alfred set down his glass of wine. “What news from the Ministry of Civic Enlightenment?”
Allyn smiled. “Why don’t you ask Yrgess first?”
Simon looked displeased at having been called by his sigil name, the lesser dragon, pronounced “Air-gess.” But he cleared his throat and said, “Father, we arrested an enemy of the State today at the wall.”
Alfred raised an eyebrow. “Is that so?”
Simon nodded. “A youth named Sandor Hayes published an article against the Party in a small underground newspaper, and the Stam caught him attempting to flee the Federal District. He is now detained at the Lawministry awaiting trial.”
Short for Secret Tactical Arm of the Ministry, the Stam was the country’s secret police under Simon’s purview at the Ministry of Law and Peace. The Stam was assumed always to be lurking somewhere in the background, watching or listening.
Alfred, who had been swirling his wine in his glass, stopped abruptly and glared at his son. “When you say ‘against the Party,’ what exactly do you mean?”
“Well.” Simon cleared his throat. “It’s rather a lengthy screed, but in essence, he accuses us of corruption. He even goes so far as to name names.”
“You?” Allyn smirked.
“Very funny.”
“How many people have seen it?” said Alfred.
“We don’t know yet. But we’ve confiscated every copy we could find.”
“And have you arrested the printer, the publisher, and whoever funded this…newspaper?”
“We’re still looking for them, Father. But don’t worry. We will find them and bring them to justice.”
“What do you feel is an appropriate punishment?”
“Why, death, of course.”
Aveline shuddered and looked down at her plate.
“And you, Monnag?” Alfred turned his gaze to his daughter. “Do you feel that death is appropriate?”
“Absolutely not.”
“What?” Simon leaned forward. “Why not?”
Allyn paused before answering. “I agree that we must eliminate the Resistance, root, stem, and bud. However.” She lifted a finger. “The goal of the Stam is protection, not punishment. Mr. Hayes quite obviously has a moral compass. If he hadn’t known he’d committed treason, he wouldn’t have tried to flee. The best way to handle such a person is to make an example of him. To reform him, not punish him. He is a Party member, so a course of reeducation in the Party ideals should be sufficient. At the end, he will publicly reaffirm the Sacred Oath.”
“No.” Simon pounded his fist on the table so that the wineglasses clattered, making the children jump. “We’re talking high treason here, Father. Now is not the time to be lenient. If you let someone like Hayes off easy, he will do it again. And others will follow.”
Alfred shook his head. “Your sister is right. True power comes from having the ability to punish but choosing to forgive instead.” He turned to Allyn. “And how does the Lightministry propose to handle this?”
“We intend to portray him as a young man gone astray, one who admits his wrongdoing and sees the light. A timeless story arc. Then we shall refocus the public’s attention. What we need is a gesture of goodwill on the part of the Ministry. A personal gesture. By me.”
“What we need is a firing squad,” said Simon.
“Enough,” said Alfred. “No more of this talk in front of the children. Come, we’ll continue this discussion in my study.”
Allyn stood and kissed Aveline on the top of her head. “Be good, my darling. I have to return to the Ministry tonight, so don’t wait up for me.”
“Yes, Mother.”
She watched as her grandfather, mother, and uncle disappeared into Alfred’s study to drink brandy and talk politics.
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In bed that night, Aveline closed her eyes but could not sleep because of the strong moonlight through her window, bathing the comforter in white. She clasped her hands and prayed to the God of the Sacred Order of the Monnag, a State God who presided over political affairs and blessed the country’s leaders.
Please keep Grandfather and Mother and Uncle Simon safe, she prayed. Then she added, as she did every night, Please bring Mother a husband and me a father.
She hardly remembered her own father, a colonel in the Air Command who’d died in battle when she was only two years old. His name was Christopher Llewellyn III. Because he had the same name as his father and grandfather, everyone had called him Kit. Upon his marriage he had taken the Fleur name, as was customary for those marrying into the ruling family, whether male or female.
A black-and-white photograph of him in uniform hung above the mantel in the Great Room. Aveline’s resemblance to him was striking; she had inherited his round face and broad nose and blond hair. She’d heard stories about his bravery and loyalty from her grandfather, but her mother never spoke of him, as though he’d never existed. Without her father, Aveline felt that she was missing out on half of who she was. Perhaps, had he lived, she wouldn’t have turned out as such a cowardly person; she might have been someone who could stand up to the bullies at school.
Thank you for listening, God.
Her prayers finished, she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep in the light of the moon.
Excerpt from S.J. Carson's Second Novel, Third Moon
Chapter 1
Kateri James hated the way she looked. She had a round, childlike face with big brown eyes and full lips; unruly mousy-brown hair; and a short, pudgy figure. Her back was riddled with scars from the beatings she’d taken over the years from sadistic teachers and bosses.
At almost eighteen years old, she should have been at university. She was certainly bright enough, and a voracious reader. But, because of her lowly Genetic Fitness Score, she was not allowed to attend.
On the planet Ceres X—so called because it was tenth from the sun—each person was assigned a Genetic Fitness Score at birth. Determined by an analysis of the child’s DNA, the GFS was based on factors like prospective intelligence, facial symmetry, height, weight, metabolism, robustness of the organs, and likelihood of heritable diseases. Scores ranged from 1 to 5.
One’s score determined everything in their life—where they could live, what educational level they were allowed to attain, what jobs they could have, whom they could marry, and even where they could shop and eat and socialize. Those who scored below a 2 were called the Ungrul—the untouchables. The Twos and Threes were middle-class. And those who scored a 4 or above were known as the Ta’laan—the upper class, addressed by the titles of “Lord” and “Lady.”
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Kat was a 1.2. An Ungrul. Part of the vast lower class of Ceres X.
The best job she could get was as a loungemaid at the Channel 10 Lounge in the Dhoam, the enclosed downtown area of the city of Galadris. “Channel 10” was something of an in-joke—there was no such television station. Of the hundreds of channels available to the high-scorers, 10 was the test channel. The plasma screens along the walls of the Lounge sometimes displayed the black-and-white test pattern, but more often they played music videos or colorful ambient scenes.
As a loungemaid, Kat was required to wear a dark-colored jumpsuit with a hood and a mesh veil to hide her face. She was supposed to be neither seen nor heard as she did her job, which was to bring drinks to the patrons—only Fours and above were allowed in—and tidy up after them, do dishes, sweep and mop the floors, and maintain the cleanliness of the bathrooms. Because this was a Ta’laan lounge, everything had to be perfect and spotless at all times. She was not allowed to speak to the patrons, other than to take their orders. She was also not allowed to touch them, as Ungrul bodies were considered unclean.
Kat worked twelve hours a day. In her minimal downtime, she frequented the cyber cafes in the Wharf, the rundown neighborhood where she lived. Because it rained almost constantly on Ceres X, and because Kat couldn’t afford a sturdy umbrella, her hair and clothing were almost always wet.
Once, she stood outside her favorite café, Kismet, for almost two hours in the rain after the scanner broke. At the entrance to virtually every establishment on Ceres X was a machine that performed a quick retinal scan to identify the individual before they were allowed to enter. Once the scan was complete, their profile appeared on a small screen with their Citizen ID, date of birth, and, most importantly, their GFS.
After Kismet’s scanner went down, the management had to do blood tests to confirm identity. When the manager finally got to Kat near the end of the line and pricked her finger and emptied the droplet into an analyzer, she cringed as she saw her “1.2” pop up on his portable screen for everyone to see. Her inferior blood. The Ungrul were notoriously classist among themselves. A guy behind her, who turned out to be only a 1.4, laughed at her number, even though it was only two-tenths lower than his.
She stormed ahead of him, into the café, thankful for the rain that disguised her tears.
What was the point of that blood test, anyway? she wondered. To humiliate the lowest of the low?
As Kat saw it, scans and blood tests had no place among the Ungrul. She could understand why someplace like the Channel 10 Lounge would test people before allowing them to enter—that was a Ta’laan-only establishment. The places she frequented, on the other hand, were ratty Wharf cafes and slop restaurants.
After ordering her usual seafoam latte, which was really more salt and foam than coffee, she sat at one of the sticky plastic tables and typed her CID into the blinking console on the computer. Upon hitting “Enter,” the console displayed her bank account with sixteen kronar worth of credits. It cost two kronar per game, but it was worth it to disappear from the world for an hour or so.
She picked up the virtual-reality headset and slipped it on. In this roleplaying game, unlike in her real life, she could be whomever she wanted. Most of the time, she was Lady Renna, a beautiful Ta’laan who lived in a seaside mansion in the distant city of Sunnoon. She could design every aspect of Lady Renna’s physical appearance, from the color of her hair (amber) to the shape of her body (hourglass) to her attire (amethyst fur coat). She also gave Renna a blue-haired boyfriend with chiseled abs, a menagerie of horses and dogs and cats, and even a sailboat.
Two games later, the manager kicked her out to make room for others. With a sigh, Kat got up from her chair and walked out into the rain, down to the big crumbling brick building where she lived. Once a warehouse, the building now contained hundreds of sleep pods for young working Ungrul like herself. That was all they were allowed—not even a room, or a shared room, but a narrow sleep pod with a pillow and blanket atop a thin mattress, a couple of built-in drawers for personal belongings, and a light metal door for privacy.
On her way back from the communal bathroom, she remembered that tomorrow was her eighteenth birthday. Her coming-of-age. She sat at the end of her pod with the door open, combing her wet, tangled hair and talking to her next-door neighbor Suriya Bonn, who was a year older.
“It’s my birthday tomorrow,” she told Suriya quietly. “And nobody cares. My parents are dead.”
“Mine, too.” Suriya was braiding her long black hair. “Bad genetics. It sucks.” She secured the end of her braid with a rubber band, then turned and slid into her pod, emerging with a plastic bag of food. “Happy birthday, dear Kat.” She held the bag out to her.
Kat accepted it gratefully, voice trembling. “You remembered.”
“Of course I did, silly. When I first moved here, I asked you when your birthday was and you told me it was the twelfth day of Karka.” Karka was the twenty-second month of the Cereian calendar.
Smiling, Kat opened the bag to discover that it contained pink graal in the shapes of sea creatures—octopodes, lobster, crabs, squid, whales. She popped one into her mouth and savored the overly sweet, crunchy snack. Living in the Wharf, she’d seen live sea creatures before, in cages being carried to market from the fishing boats. However, she’d never actually eaten a whole crab or lobster before; only the Ta’laan could afford them. The lower class got only seafood puree mixed into porridge.
Kat held the bag out to Suriya, and the two polished off the graal in no time.
After, when they were each curled up in their pods with the doors closed, Kat heard her stomach purr from hunger. This cheap food simply didn’t fill you up. Despite her plumpness, she was actually starving.
Rolling over on her back, she thought, as usual, about the class system. The differences between people were mostly on the inside. At the extreme ends of the spectrum, you could probably peg someone for an Ungrul or a Ta’laan based on their physical appearance. The Ungrul was more likely to be unattractive, overweight, and chronically ill, while the Ta’laan was more likely to be beautiful, slim, and radiant with good health.
With most people, though, it was difficult or even impossible to tell their score just by looking at them; hence the need for scanners. The scanners made sure that any low-scorer who had improved herself through diet, exercise, and study would never live in certain neighborhoods, hold certain jobs, or go to certain schools. No matter what she did, she would always be considered “genetically unfit.” Because of the number she was assigned at birth.
It’s not fair, thought Kat as she drifted off to sleep. Nothing on this planet is fair.